9.10.2010

Metamorphosis

Closed fist
Darting eyes
movement shackled
looking through
the blind spot
freedom in chains

Open
bit by bit
pieces of freedom

released within
realize
expand
see
fly

2 comments:

ladyauthor1 said...

Another vulnerable, open and honest write dear one. Simple, clear images that speak to the heart on a deep level about the journey we are on. Loved this one!
Mom

Marnee said...

This one I really worked on increasing creative expression. I wrote the thoughts down then took each line and looked for a deeper expression of the feeling.
The valedictorian at Taylor's graduation read a beautiful metaphysical style poem and it's interpretation at the end of her speech at their graduation, that so inspired me to practice and learn that poetic style. I've got more learning to do on the subject. :)